Do you feel alone? or do you have no friends to share what you are feeling ? You do not being afraid! I have
a way to make you don not feel the loneliness anymore. The best way is writing.
Writing is the best way to escape you from loneliness; you can write everything
that you feel although you have no friends. You can start from simple way such
as by writing
a diary, writing poems, short story, novel and
your interesting topic.
However, not a few people think that writing is difficult. There are many elements that
should be more pay attention by writer such as
new ideas, interesting topic, main idea and the coherence between the sentences.
I think the important thing in writing is people having good mood. If people are not in good mood, it will
be difficult for them to get an idea and to write it down. Moreover, each person has weaknesses and strengthens in writing,
including me. In this essay I will tell about my weaknesses and strength in
writing.
I am interested in
writing but I have some problems in writing. Actually I have strong desire to write. Someday, I hope I can be a good or professional
writer. I am very happy if someone has time to read my essays and give me about
his or her opinion. It belongs to my strength in my
way on being a good writer. I have many weaknesses rather than my strenghtens in
writing.
My first weakness
is in finding new ideas. It was difficult to find
an idea for me. For example, when I had a task about an essay, I
needed a long time and more patients to think
about idea that I would write. Sometimes it made me lazy and I left my pen because I still did not get the idea yet. Moreover, finding good idea or something new is
important thing in writing. People who had
a good idea in writing would make their essay
interesting and readers would be interested in
reading that essay. But I had a way to solve my problem in getting an idea. I though the best way is
reading more. By reading
many books I got more knowledges and the additional
information that related to my
topic.
My second weakness
is about grammar. My grammar is not clear
enough; I mean that sometimes I
wrote in wrong grammar, and it made me lazy to write an essay or article because I am
afraid that
the readers laughed
at me. Although I tried to write well many times but
I still made a mistake about the grammar. For example, sometime I missed verb or subject in my
sentence and used wrong tenses in my essay.
My third weakness
is less of vocabulary. I still had
less vocabulary. Many vocabularies are needed in writing to make writer easier to write and make the essay more
interesting, because they should not use the same and repeated word many times. For example, writer can use ‘silent’
for the first paragraph and ‘quiet’ in next
paragraph which the two words has
similar meaning. It would not make the
reader bored. By reading
many books it
could solve my problem about vocabulary.
In conclusion, even though I have many weaknesses compared
strengths in writing I should not be lazy in writing an essay if I still want to achieve my dream become a good
writer. I have to do many exercises, read and learn more. Another way that should I do is I should read many
sources about how to write great essays.
the opening sentences are interesting, but there are some grammatical errors and I think it's better if you revise the second paragraph hehe
ReplyDeletethank you for your suggestion . I will do it :)
ReplyDeleteNice explanation, :)
ReplyDeletePlease attention with conjunction that you use, make your sentence connect with the next sentence.
Look at the second paragraph, "I like writing. But I have problem in writing. Actually I have strong desire to write"..
dont but conjunction "BUT" after you close the first statement, maybe you can delete comma and connect the first sentence to the second sentence without comma, because you have conjunction BUT.
"I like writing but I have problem in writing"
thank you for your suggestion . you are right , i will revise it :)
ReplyDeleteNice essay, but you have to concern with the punctuation there. You sometimes put wrong posititon of puntuation in your essay.
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Tq ;)
the first sentences in the first paragraph is the fact that happen by most of people. Its really good. you also write the example of your idea. I think your essay is good.
ReplyDeletedear kak Rilla : thank you for your suggestion kak :)
ReplyDeleteokee I will :)
dear kak helza : thank you kak :)
ReplyDeleteEnglish word for kelebihan is STRENGTHS not STRENGTHENS, risaa...
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